Show vs Tell

My editor advises that I struggle with wanting to tell my story
rather than showing it.

So, I could say that "the Rosemary Beach sunset at our walkover."
That would be telling you what I see.

But I should say something like: "I was anxious about the dinner party, so I strolled down the boardwalk to see the sunset. The glorious colors calmed my spirit."

Is that showing you what I saw?

Warms-CYM